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Many thanks Manuela (Ducats)
 Yesterday, 08:32 Post #239053

Quote: The Gannet, Monday, 17 Sep 2018 16:24
Hi Manuela,

Many thanks for the very encouraging review. Hope that you get as much out of Youwriteon as I have done.

And Wow! Your biography makes some reading.

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Many thanks Manuela (Ducats)
The Gannet
 17 Sep 2018, 16:24 Post #239048

Hi Manuela,

Many thanks for the very encouraging review. Hope that you get as much out of Youwriteon as I have done.

And Wow! Your biography makes some reading.

Well done and best of luck

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 17 Sep 2018, 14:22 Post #239047

OK, thanks.
I now have a blog (or two): Geiser Plume; And in Spanish: Ni Aqui ni Alla
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 17 Sep 2018, 11:17 Post #239046

Quote: DrGuessWho, Monday, 17 Sep 2018 11:06
So... what is the address of this site?

Critique Circle. I've been on there since the 29th of July and have posted seven of my chapters in the General queue and also have a private queue running and in total have had 184 critiques (reviews) of my work so far.
It's amazing and it works really well. No-one seems to be afraid to be honest, the way you review is brilliant because you can do it inline and put a comment right where it's needed. You get more points for longer submissions (up to 2) and need to write at least 300 words. I've had a number that have been over 1000 words and one that was 5000.
Everyone is really friendly and supportive. It's free for the basic package which I started with but I wanted the opportunity to have my novel loaded on there so I upped to Premium but I've just changed to Premium Gold because you can edit while it is live in a queue which is useful as I'm getting up to 30 critiques in a week and it would be nice for the later ones not to have to repeat advice I've already acted on in my master copy.
I would STRONGLY recommend it as a wonderful tool to improve not just your writing skills but also your reviewing ones, which in their turn improve your own assessments of your own work. My story has improved out of all proportion.
Branch out and try another forum website
 17 Sep 2018, 11:06 Post #239045

So... what is the address of this site?
I now have a blog (or two): Geiser Plume; And in Spanish: Ni Aqui ni Alla
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 17 Sep 2018, 09:23 Post #239044

Any way I'll be subscribing to your feed and I hope you post again soon.
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 17 Sep 2018, 07:19 Post #239042

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Thank you Princesisto
 17 Sep 2018, 05:49 Post #239041

OK thank you, I understand much better.

Just briefly, this is not a public place. Not like one of President Trump's (or Prime Minister May's) rallies. This is the partially-enclosed balcony of the Green Palace, on a rather high 2nd floor. The "room" is small and everyone there is the personal invitee of the President, including the Princess and her family. There is literally no security. The Army is controlling entrance downstairs. It is a short crawl for the Princess to get to the President and the bystanders are in shock. They don't understand what she is doing until she gets to the President. They know that the President and Princess were very close, so they do not feel moved to challenge her. If a child had crawled in from the street it might have been a different story . . . .

Certainly, Guatemalan Presidents can have a lot of security, especially ex-Army officers, but this President was very much a populist and she is talking from the balcony to the people in the Plaza in front of the Palace. The assassination is totally unexpected and there would have been no need for security on the balcony.

The General is not asking for a medical report from a child. He knows the answer. He can see the trajectory of the bullet (that is why he is smiling at the ceiling) the bullet hole and the motionless victim. He is a professional, trained in Quantico. He almost can't believe his luck, because it was a tricky shot from the Plaza through the balcony, so he sort of wants to hear the Princess say it, since she is there and full of blood. It is also giving her, and the bystanders, a message, like "Do you understand who is the President now?" She gets it: that is why she tries to kill him.

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