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mathewferguson
 09 Jul 2008, 02:42 #38620 Reply To Post
What an exciting time to be on YWO forums. Currently I've got a few people upset because of what I said about Psychology as a science (my degree in it apparently means nothing).

I've got another guy upset because I started a post with a theory that those who are obsessed with SD manipulation and chart position are probably not submitting work to real life publishers. It was a question and I got answers from various people.

I've said such contentious things in the past like "English degrees kill more writers than they make".

I said "author advisers are not worth the money" - and had an argument with an author adviser. (I still despise that profession by the way.)

I've said "agents are not as busy as they claim". How daring of me! How I have besmirched that noble profession!

I've even talked at length about things you can do with your work (get it illustrated, write a screenplay, make a toy, etc) and had to defend that (against someone who knew nothing about licensing).

It really does make me wonder ... why does anyone care what I think about these topics? Does it affect your day, your life in the slightest? Am I perhaps insulting your profession?

Perhaps you are worried I am leading people astray!

For those of you who might be led astray ... remember to think for yourselves. Don't accept any idea just because the person presenting it claims some authority. Do your own research. Test the idea against other ideas. We have the web - use it. Don't just swallow what I say -- see if it matches with evidence in the world. See if you can find information that contradicts what I say. Remember: you are the one who will live with whatever decision you make from ideas presented to you, not me. SO, think for yourselves.

On to writing/editing/publishing. The question I would have asked of me is this "If you've worked in publishing for so long and work as a writer then why don't you have your own original fiction published? Huh? Mr Big I'm-a-writer? Tell us."

No one has asked this of me. The answer of course is that I have published an immense amount of licensed books (Disney et al), have written a lot of marketing copy, sales copy, advertisements and so on ... but that is not highly regarded by publishers. The only thing that matters is the quality of the story you are presenting. The piece I have up on YWO I think is pretty good -- but I can see where it can be better. Perhaps it will be published. It has a better chance than other stuff I have written.

I do hold back harsh truths on these forums because I would never ever want to discourage anyone from continuing to write. This site is meant to be a nurturing, safe and helpful place. To thrash out with reality serves no purpose. If people ask me direct questions about topics I will give the direct answer however.

I do make passing comments about various topics and I never lie. This in my real life has lead to me telling an advertising company I worked with that they should drop one of their clients because "they were evil". It has led to me losing a job because I refused to lie to an author about royalty statements. I have caused problems at another place that produced a million plastic toys for a hamburger company and had (I laugh here) a "green policy". My passing comment? "Your green policy is a joke because it is obvious what this company does".

I have refused to water down ethical standard documents. I referred to a book that was being pushed on my company by Disney as "a terrible book and a terrible waste of money" -- I was proven right, by the way.

Places I have worked have profited enormously from following my advice. People I have worked with have profited. I've pulled at least twenty I-have-no-credentials-but-I-am-a-good-writer people into companies I've worked for and helped push off their careers. I actively promote illustrators I've met to various places I get to work.

My advice of course has not always been followed and I am wrong from time to time. I have said things will fail and they didn't. I chosen paths that haven't succeeded. However, on a general assessment, I'm right a lot more than I'm wrong and I do have the publishing record to show it.

So ... I say the things I say because I do think they are right and I do really want to help people to write better. I care enough to get into debates when people step away from the question (English degrees kill more writers than they make) and step toward ad hominem attacks (I present opinions as facts). My caring over that has a limit too. Usually a few posts back and forth and then I'm bored.

I feel like I have been attacked a few times because perhaps I am viewed as an authority because of my publishing background. Sometimes in a spiteful thought I think some people are jealous. Sometimes I realise I have shredded a comfy dream they are holding close to their heart. Other times people are up for forum fighting and off we go.
Other times people have excellent debates and discuss all manner of things and a lot of people contribute and its just beautiful.

That is what I really want. I'd love it if you think I am wrong for you to write "I think this is wrong because of x". I'm always open to more information and great discussion. I love talking with people and finding out what they think and why they think it.

The advice of mine you should always follow? When I tell you to delete "stubbornly, stupidly, crazily, sexily, etc" out of your work - do it! :-)

At the end of this long post the point I am getting to is that I love the vibrant YWO community. I am so very happy I joined this site. I want this to continue and I really don't want to get bogged down in angry fighting over things that really are not important.

I suppose I should finish with a question so this isn't just a personal message out there... hmm ...

What was the first story you remember writing?

Mine was a first-person diary perspective of a car that was stolen, used in a bank robbery and then repainted and dumped in a wrecking yard. The whole class clapped when I read it out and I got walked to another class to read it for them. I still get quite emotional when I remember it.

:-)

With sincerest respect and good wishes to everyone on YWO.
Mat
slavandria
 09 Jul 2008, 05:26 #38623 Reply To Post
Quote: mathewferguson, Wednesday, 9 Jul 2008 02:42
What an exciting time to be on YWO forums. Currently I've got a few people upset because of what I said...I suppose I should finish with a question so this isn't just a personal message out there... hmm ...

What was the first story you remember writing?

Mine was a first-person diary perspective of a car that was stolen, used in a bank robbery and then repainted and dumped in a wrecking yard. The whole class clapped when I read it out and I got walked to another class to read it for them. I still get quite emotional when I remember it.

:-)

With sincerest respect and good wishes to everyone on YWO.
Mat


Mat, to be honest, while I thank you for your insight, I feel from the way you write on the message boards that you are arrogant, egotistical and unyielding. While what you write may be true in most cases, the way you come across to me is with a more holier-than-thou attitude. This flippancy is what angers people, not your words. I know you may not want to come across that way and I know that saying something in the written word is much different than saying things to someone's face. However, we are all writers here and should know how to get across "emotion" in our writing. I think to many of us, you appear to be a "know-it-all" and unwilling to listen to other viewpoints simply because you haven't witnessed it in your travels. Just keep in mind that just because you can't see air, doesn't mean it's not there, if you catch my meaning. I guess what I'm trying to say is just be aware of feelings when you post. No one likes feeling degraded and I'm sure you don't want to come across as condescending...

Now, on to your question about our first story. Mine was in 4th grade, Ms. McNamara's class. I remember it very well.

It is winter and Bernie, a redheaded woodpecker, ridiculed and outcast from his home in the Land of the Sun, is in search of a new home and a new family to love. Lost and alone, he comes across a sad wizard – Thistle - who has lost his magic ring deep in the Forest of Light. Bernie offers to help Thistle find his ring if the wizard will help him find a new home. Renewed with hope, Thistle accepts Bernie’s offer and the two set off together. There is just one problem – when Thistle tells Bernie where they are going, Bernie breaks down and tells Thistle he has an unnatural fear of…trees. Desperate to find his magic ring, as well as to fulfill his promise to Bernie, Thistle realizes he must cure the woodpecker of his fear. To do so, Thistle must enter the Goblin Village and take back the Copper Stars that were stolen from the faerie village of Tsea, and shower Bernie with their magic sparkles. But Thistle has never battled the goblins without his magic ring. As expected, a struggle ensues. Just when it seems all hope is lost, Bernie and Thistle realize they are stronger together than they are apart and discover that with a great amount of desire, perseverance and faith, all things are possible.

My teacher gave me the book, A Wrinkle in Time, for having the best story in her class. I was so excited. That was a big deal to a 9 year old back then! I really should try to resurrect the story as it was lost with all of my earlier writings many, many years ago.
Jen

The cure for writer's cramp is writer's block.

Imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what you desire, you will what you imagine and at last you create what you will. - George Bernard Shaw
benkelly
 09 Jul 2008, 08:14 #38634 Reply To Post
There is a move in the world to avoid strong flavours and strong opinions.

This is wrong.

Even if I don't agree with some of your points or your tone, your posts stimulate discussion (fact) and that is far more useful than twenty emoticons or a public flounce (opinion).

oh and...

A big box of cherries that no longer wanted to be red but ended up fighting over alternative colours. They all lived happily ever after just before I heard my mum calling me for my tea.
This post was last edited by benkelly, 09 Jul 2008, 08:21
"Suck it up, say thank you and move on."

NickP
 09 Jul 2008, 08:26 #38636 Reply To Post
Do you think Ted will start a "Let's talk about Mathew" Forum?

Perhaps we should ask him.
"...the likes of NickP can rant on if they like"

I occasionally rant on at http://amonsterinthemirror.blogspot.com/
marywood18
 09 Jul 2008, 08:29 #38637 Reply To Post
[ to be honest, while I thank you for your insight, I feel from the way you write on the message boards that you are arrogant, egotistical and unyielding.]

This has been proven wrong, by fact, not opinion. I took Matt to task over his close association of Angelscribe to a point he was making, as did others, what followed was a gracious apology by Matt. I think that leaves your opinion of Matts character without fact to substantiate it.

In answer to other posts on Matts character Iwould say this:

Contributers here should take a step back and remember how we all valued Mat's opinion and facts when he first arrived. Both were a revelation to us.

Matt is a professional writer and editor, he is not used to mincing his words or wrapping them up in cotton wool, he would not be successful if he did. In his work he has to post his credits. It therefore is second nature to do so when talking to us. But, don't just see these, see what else he says. In this peice alone he tells us when he got it wrong, too.

The way he writes is how rejections and acceptances (though the latter is my opinion as I haven't had any to be able to evidence this as fact) will come across. Editors and agents don't mince their words. They tell it how it is. That can be painful, I know that for a fact.

You may argue, them, telling it how it is, is only as they see it. But then, what other way is there? So! You may say, their words are only their opinion. Right! But, is it of value, then? Well that is up to you, do you take on board their proffessional opinion, or do you go with your amatuer ego and ignore them? I would argue the same goes for Matt. If you value the opinion and facts Matt posts here, then accept that he shoots them straight from the hip and think of it as preparation for the wording of your future rejections.

On the amatuer ego point: You may of course believe totally in your work and send it to many other editors/agents hoping you find one that agrees with you and sees your wonderful work as you do. Good! That will mean you have taken on board advice Matt has given, when he told us multiple submissions are something we can do, and not to believe the speal put out by agents that this is not acceptable. (he may not have said it as nicely as that) The point is HE told us. And, he substantiated it by telling us that agents and publishers put this out to deter you from multiple submissions in case you are good and they miss picking up on you.

From other contributions I have made, my saying here about opinions, may lead you to say, 'take your own advice!' It is well known I have paid expensively for what I now know are opinions. Well, I came to know that several hundreds of pounds, too late! Matt gives opinions and facts and presents them in a, 'I know', way. That is because he does! Cherry pick what you all want from what he gives, but don't shoot the messenger!
benkelly
 09 Jul 2008, 08:47 #38639 Reply To Post
The cherries stayed red by the way
This post was last edited by benkelly, 09 Jul 2008, 08:47
"Suck it up, say thank you and move on."

marywood18
 09 Jul 2008, 08:55 #38645 Reply To Post
Quote: benkelly, Wednesday, 9 Jul 2008 08:47
The cherries stayed red by the way


BenKelly! You always make me laugh! Was that after you picked them or before?

missmorston
 09 Jul 2008, 09:37 #38651 Reply To Post
Quote: marywood18, Wednesday, 9 Jul 2008 08:29

Contributers here should take a step back and remember how we all valued Mat's opinion and facts when he first arrived. Both were a revelation to us.



Dear Mary - I have every respect for you and, actually, for Matt, as I don't know him, and may find that in real life he is not at all as he comes over in his posts. However, your statement above simply isn't true. I'm sure some people have seen Matt's words as a 'revelation', and valued them. He has made some very sensible statements that might be of great help to new writers, with the proviso that they are not accepted unquestioningly. However, none of what he has said so far has been a revelation to many of us, so 'we all' is a bit sweeping. But I'm not here to fight the issue, and as you say, Matt was very gracious in his responses when taken to task over his references to Angelscribe.

Matt - sorry to talk 'about' you rather than 'to' you - no offence meant.

Answer to question: My first story (which was years later ripped out of my jotting book and burned by my ex husband :angry was about a psychedelic pixie who set up a refuge for misunderstood children I wrote it when I was six, so I don't think any agents would have been interested
JR
Stop the sketch - it's too silly
Elisabeth
 09 Jul 2008, 11:17 #38660 Reply To Post
Matthew, in an increasingly wishy-washy, politically correct world I don't have a problem with someone who has strong opinions and stands by them. (Party on, Bardot!) Yes, there will always be those who are overly influenced by the views of others but they must learn to descriminate. If we are not careful we will moderate ourselves out of debate and free speech.

My story was about a herd of wild horses - the only thing I ever wrote about as a child - and I thought it was brilliant. I was at school in England at the time and the teacher thought it bizarre to have named one animal after another - my fiery stallion was called Wildcat - and put it down to my being French. Perhaps that is the case as the habit has stayed with me, my two Welsh ponies are called Hawkwind and Pendragon.
marywood18
 09 Jul 2008, 11:20 #38662 Reply To Post
(Dear Mary - I have every respect for you and, actually, for Matt, as I don't know him, and may find that in real life he is not at all as he comes over in his posts. However, your statement above simply isn't true. I'm sure some people have seen Matt's words as a 'revelation', and valued them. He has made some very sensible statements that might be of great help to new writers, with the proviso that they are not accepted unquestioningly. However, none of what he has said so far has been a revelation to many of us, so 'we all' is a bit sweeping. )



Sorry, JR, I was thinking of all the folk who responded with such enthusiasm to Matt's first posts and the help he gave them. And those who begged him for a free willie review of their work and how he responded so generously to that, and I was trying to put a balanced view of how he comes across and a possible reason why.

I didn't mean to make a sweeping statement, too many people have done that about and to the detriment of Matt.

I think he is a lively contributer and gets under everyone's skin, favourably or not. I imagine him having a whale of a time getting us long distant cousins going. Surprised no one has mentioned the criminals and vagabonds and our rejects, of his beginnings, as yet!! Especially you BenKelly!!!! Your contributions are often along the witty and very funny line, I love your picture! You look to me like an eccentric who allows what he wants to, to go over his head, but digests and spits out what he doesn't, in one liners that crease me.

By the way, I didn't answer Matts question. I will always be proud of a bit of scullduggery on the part of my son and I. He was given a task of writing a story from a title (wished I could remember it) when he was a lad of eleven or so. He was in tears over it as he hadn't a clue where to begin and he so wanted to please his teacher. I sat and wrote it for him, then he copied it out. Oh the praise he received and I revelled in! For him of course!!!! I'd forgotten what a bad mum I was.
This post was last edited by marywood18, 09 Jul 2008, 11:24
marywood18
 09 Jul 2008, 11:38 #38666 Reply To Post
Quote: Elisabeth, Wednesday, 9 Jul 2008 11:17 -

If we are not careful we will moderate ourselves out of debate and free speech.
.


Hear! Hear! I wish I knew what that was in French. I do know who Bardot is, though, I remeber her as a young star. Whops! Showing my age again!


[/the teacher thought it bizarre to have named one animal after another quote]

Wasn't, Free Willie, named after another animal?
This post was last edited by marywood18, 09 Jul 2008, 11:42
flyingtart
 09 Jul 2008, 11:44 #38668 Reply To Post
Quote: mathewferguson, Wednesday, 9 Jul 2008 02:42

It really does make me wonder ... why does anyone care what I think about these topics? Does it affect your day, your life in the slightest? Am I perhaps insulting your profession?


Mathew, you rattle a few egos on this forum. Don't worry about it. Ego is the single greatest block to improving as a writer. As long as anyone thinks they know it all, they will never learn.

I think you're doing us all a valuable service. Keep it up!
Lorraine
 09 Jul 2008, 12:02 #38671 Reply To Post
Quote: flyingtart, Wednesday, 9 Jul 2008 11:44
As long as anyone thinks they know it all, they will never learn.
Now they are truly wise words.

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slavandria
 09 Jul 2008, 12:51 #38683 Reply To Post
Quote: marywood18, Wednesday, 9 Jul 2008 08:29
[ to be honest, while I thank you for your insight, I feel from the way you write on the message boards that you are arrogant, egotistical and unyielding.]

This has been proven wrong, by fact, not opinion. I took Matt to task over his close association of Angelscribe to a point he was making, as did others, what followed was a gracious apology by Matt. I think that leaves your opinion of Matts character without fact to substantiate it.



Mary, I don't have a problem with Mat's character or his information. I'm all up for it. The thing is, he didn't think what he did, in your example, was wrong until he was called on it - repeatedly. Only then, did he concede but I'm not even sure if Mat truly agreed with the apology or if he did it to appease us. Personally, I didn't feel it was an honest apology but that is neither here nor there. The issue at that point was between Mat and Angelscribe and if she was ok with his apology, that's all that mattered.

Mat, and anyone else here, can shoot from the hip and tell us like it is. However, and this is my opinion only, this site is not a place for others to cut us down, ridicule, or slap us around, but rather a place to bond with others going through the same experiences so we can learn together. It's like a writer's "family" and the way I look at family is that we are all here to help each other. Lessons are to be learned, each of us have to learn to accept personalities and viewpoints but we don't need to be talked down to. Yes, we want those with more experience to teach us, but not in a condescending way. You may not feel Mat has been cruel or undermining in his "tone" but many of us have - and we are not wrong in our opinions. As I said before, it is not his words that offends, but the way he says them. We are not imbeciles or incompetent but Mat has a way, in his tone, of implying we are. I think we must remember that Mat is not the end-all, be-all of the writing industry, yet it appears his ego is trying to convince us he is and we have fallen for it, only feeding the ego.

Mat, your "I've done this, I've seen that, my experience tells me this is the way it is, etc." is great, but it is not the ONLY way to do things or get somewhere. It's what worked for you. Others find their own niche that works for them. It doesn't mean your way is better or more justified than someone elses. I'm glad you've done all you have done. I'm happy the choices you made worked for you but don't be a snob about it or make us feel that there are not other ways to achieve an end.

I in know way, shape or form want you to go away. All I ask for is some compassion. You'll get more flies with honey than with vinegar, so the old saying goes. We'll learn the hard way with our own rejection letters and taking our own baby steps. What we need from you is guidance, not berating. I appreciate your insight and wisdom, just not your style. With that said, I will consider what you say here, put to work for me what I think is useful to my situation, but ultimately, it will be life that will teach me the lessons I need to learn. Hopefully, some day, I will be in a position that you are in to help and guide people. I only hope I will not be so callous about it. I have enough editors, agents, etc. out there who are willing to "beat me up". I don't need my "teachers" to beat me up, too.

Jen

The cure for writer's cramp is writer's block.

Imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what you desire, you will what you imagine and at last you create what you will. - George Bernard Shaw
KRobb
 09 Jul 2008, 12:54 #38686 Reply To Post
What do I think? People should spell Mathew's name correctly.

First thing I remember writing was my own take on the Mr Men books onto booklets made out of writing paper folded so the picture of the 'Man' in my story appeared on the front. I hope not to be sued for breach of copyright.
K
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