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chickin
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The Tracks by Daniel Lewis So much to admire in these chapters. I would buy this book in a heartbeat. EDIT: I read it for the second time this morning just to read an example of how it should be done. Benny in particular - wonderful stuff. Plus by putting this rec it knocks the hermes thing off.
This post was last edited by chickin, 10 Nov 2011, 10:21
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kazmojazz
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Love this too.
So jealous of the way Dan gets inside the characters' heads. Brilliant!
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daaanlewis
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thanks both, that's really kind of you! dan
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Quote: daaanlewis, Saturday, 12 Nov 2011 19:17thanks both, that's really kind of you! dan Dan I just reviewed The Tracks and owe you a slight apology - I had it down as a short story, not a novel opening. Sorry about that, but it made no difference to the scores, ie, I couldn't have scored it higher. I add my agreement to what the others have said here - it's first class and a great read for anyone who is here to learn the craft. Good luck with it. Martin
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chickin
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What the bleep? Number two to number 21!!!
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daaanlewis
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haha, what the bleep indeed! i've no idea. i've just emailed ywo, as i've followed all the 'rules' but seem to have been chucked out the top 10. very confused, but i'm sure all will be resolved. hope so, anyway. i see you've reposted 'justice' - best of luck with it! i'll give it another read when i can dan Quote: chickin, Saturday, 26 Nov 2011 08:45What the bleep? Number two to number 21!!!
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Quote: daaanlewis, Saturday, 26 Nov 2011 09:44haha, what the bleep indeed! i've no idea. i've just emailed ywo, as i've followed all the 'rules' but seem to have been chucked out the top 10. very confused, but i'm sure all will be resolved. hope so, anyway. i see you've reposted 'justice' - best of luck with it! i'll give it another read when i can dan Quote: chickin, Saturday, 26 Nov 2011 08:45What the bleep? Number two to number 21!!! I thought you might have removed it as you'd sold it. Got all excited for a minute. Yes, I've tweaked and added to 'Justice'. Including a new opening in response to the feedback. But, as sod would have it, I've a review saying it's all okay bah the beginning. Ah well.
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kazmojazz
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Was horrified when The Tracks wasn't there this morning. Absolutely ridiculous!
Hope you'll be back up there tomorrow, Dan.
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daaanlewis
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ah, if only... no, something's gone a bit strange - one good review and somehow my score average has plumetted. i've emailed ted.
good luck with it, it's a great piece. always the way, always the way...
I thought you might have removed it as you'd sold it. Got all excited for a minute.
Yes, I've tweaked and added to 'Justice'. Including a new opening in response to the feedback. But, as sod would have it, I've a review saying it's all okay bah the beginning.
Ah well.
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daaanlewis
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ah, thanks you! fingers crossed... dan Quote: kazmojazz, Saturday, 26 Nov 2011 10:19Was horrified when The Tracks wasn't there this morning. Absolutely ridiculous! Hope you'll be back up there tomorrow, Dan.
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