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Many thanks for reading and commenting on the above. I have taken your suggestion and rewritten the ending, from when David comes home. If you have a mo, would you mind having a look at it and letting me know if it works for you? It's v3, as before. I still have the previous version, if it doesn't! Cheers, Sue 
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On no! You haven't changed it have you? It was perfect
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Hi Carole. I'm going to give the version with the altered ending a few credits and see how it rates. Several members have said they wanted a more gritty ending, so we'll see... Other version still up there! I enjoyed your story, by the way. Will give 36 Ghosts a read when I have time. Not feeling too good today. Someone has sent me a virus over the internet... 
This post was last edited by dancingsue, 06 Oct 2008, 10:56
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Chris Pitt
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Quote: dancingsue, Monday, 6 Oct 2008 10:39Hi Carole. I'm going to give the version with the altered ending a few credits and see how it rates. Several members have said they wanted a more gritty ending, so we'll see... Other version still up there! I enjoyed your story, by the way. Will give 36 Ghosts a read when I have time. Not feeling too good today. Someone has sent me a virus over the internet... I wonder who that was?  Cough Splutter Puke
This post was last edited by Chris Pitt, 06 Oct 2008, 12:07
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Thanks mbailey
05 Oct 2008, 16:42
