Thanks, Gregory, what a well thought out review of Newsagent. I read the start of your chapters so far and think they are great. You might think about separating the paragraphs out though so the reader can get full benefit.
I've edited mine (though it needs some more I think) to edit yours just hit the edit button on your 'my page' but make sure you do it before you put a credit on. If it's assigned to someone I don't think you can edit it while they're reading it. Ta again for the well thought out review.