Thanks, Dennis.

Your comments were really constructive and helpful - you gave the piece close attention and approached it as a reader, which made all the difference.

I've been dithering about whether to junk the 'bird-eye' view bits for a while now - waiting for a balance of reviews - and yours came in as the decider.

I feel liberated! 'Fasten your seatbelts, it's going to be a bumpy night.' All About Eve.
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