Quote: DrGuessWho, Tuesday, 5 Dec 2017 17:26 Quote: EBCB, Sunday, 3 Dec 2017 07:55
Thank you for your kind comments - and yes, I agree re the title. The story has been entered into a comp and there we called it The Female Monster - not sure if it's better! The full novel is called Fallen Woman - surprising how few novels are called that. The time shifts eventually didn't worry people - thanks to all the helpful advice we received on this site. Good luck with your own prolific output, Cheryl
Well done ending the month at #1 in the top ten chart.
I sort of agree the title is an unresolved issue. Ideally, it would reflect what is the core issue of the story, ie, the injustice of laws written by men and applied to women by men. Nothing, that isn't a mouthful, comes to mind. My best shot?
At the Mercy of Men
Too late she cried! Found a wonderful quote today for the book - at the beginning of the trial, from A 1000 Splendid Suns - Like a compass needle that points north, a man's accusing finger always finds a woman.
I thought we finished no 2, which is pretty good anyway. best, Cheryl