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PaulySpooner
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I have written a story. (The Skeleton - second draft) It has 1500 words. It is probably the easiest credit you will ever earn...why hold on to it for 4 days?
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sulcus
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Quote: PaulySpooner, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 08:08I have written a story. (The Skeleton - second draft) It has 1500 words. It is probably the easiest credit you will ever earn...why hold on to it for 4 days? Never mind its brevity, I can recommend this story as an interesting read in its own right. Go on, give it a try
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fudgefase
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Ooh, you changed the ending! Bravo!
Happy Christmas poppets!
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PaulySpooner
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Aw shucks you guys...
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panurge
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Love the new ending. Spot on!
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sulcus
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Oh bollocks, I'm going to have to take another look at this ending now aren't I ?
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sulcus
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Yes better ending.
Still don't think you can have fish offal though.
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PaulySpooner
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Quote: sulcus, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 18:47Yes better ending. Still don't think you can have fish offal though. What about fish viscera...
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sulcus
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Quote: PaulySpooner, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 21:55Quote: sulcus, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 18:47Yes better ending. Still don't think you can have fish offal though. What about fish viscera... gizzards is a good word, but again not strictly fish related
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MLT
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Quote: sulcus, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 22:18 gizzards is a good word, but again not strictly fish related[/quoteI thought only birds had gizzards, but, according to my dictionary, some fish do as well. I haven't read the piece in question, so may be talking rubbish, but what about 'entrails'? Would that fit?
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