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PaulySpooner
 02 Jul 2009, 08:08 #63361 Reply To Post
I have written a story. (The Skeleton - second draft) It has 1500 words. It is probably the easiest credit you will ever earn...why hold on to it for 4 days?


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sulcus
 02 Jul 2009, 08:20 #63362 Reply To Post
Quote: PaulySpooner, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 08:08
I have written a story. (The Skeleton - second draft) It has 1500 words. It is probably the easiest credit you will ever earn...why hold on to it for 4 days?



Never mind its brevity, I can recommend this story as an interesting read in its own right.

Go on, give it a try
fudgefase
 02 Jul 2009, 13:34 #63392 Reply To Post
Ooh, you changed the ending! Bravo!
Happy Christmas poppets!
PaulySpooner
 02 Jul 2009, 16:26 #63405 Reply To Post
Aw shucks you guys...
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panurge
 02 Jul 2009, 18:30 #63412 Reply To Post
Love the new ending. Spot on!
sulcus
 02 Jul 2009, 18:43 #63414 Reply To Post
Oh bollocks, I'm going to have to take another look at this ending now aren't I ?
sulcus
 02 Jul 2009, 18:47 #63415 Reply To Post
Yes better ending.

Still don't think you can have fish offal though.
PaulySpooner
 02 Jul 2009, 21:55 #63433 Reply To Post
Quote: sulcus, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 18:47
Yes better ending.

Still don't think you can have fish offal though.


What about fish viscera...
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sulcus
 02 Jul 2009, 22:18 #63435 Reply To Post
Quote: PaulySpooner, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 21:55
Quote: sulcus, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 18:47
Yes better ending.

Still don't think you can have fish offal though.


What about fish viscera...


gizzards is a good word, but again not strictly fish related
MLT
 02 Jul 2009, 22:26 #63438 Reply To Post
Quote: sulcus, Thursday, 2 Jul 2009 22:18
gizzards is a good word, but again not strictly fish related[/quote


I thought only birds had gizzards, but, according to my dictionary, some fish do as well.

I haven't read the piece in question, so may be talking rubbish, but what about 'entrails'? Would that fit?
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