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rosefitzrobert
 16 Apr 2012, 15:55 #147631 Reply To Post
your-vagina-isnt-just-too-big-too-floppy-and-too-hairyits-also-too-brown
Tyler Wills
 16 Apr 2012, 16:04 #147632 Reply To Post
Quote: rosefitzrobert, Monday, 16 Apr 2012 15:55
your-vagina-isnt-just-too-big-too-floppy-and-too-hairyits-also-too-brown


2 for Character. 1 for Story Plot. 5 for Pace and Structure. 5 for Language. 1 for Narrative Voice. 1 for Dialogue. 5 for Settings. 1 for Theme/Ideas.

Could have been a bit more in depth. (No pun intended, I think).

Good Luck
rosefitzrobert
 16 Apr 2012, 17:28 #147644 Reply To Post
Quote: Tyler Wills, Monday, 16 Apr 2012 16:04
Quote: rosefitzrobert, Monday, 16 Apr 2012 15:55
your-vagina-isnt-just-too-big-too-floppy-and-too-hairyits-also-too-brown


2 for Character. 1 for Story Plot. 5 for Pace and Structure. 5 for Language. 1 for Narrative Voice. 1 for Dialogue. 5 for Settings. 1 for Theme/Ideas.

Could have been a bit more in depth. (No pun intended, I think).

Good Luck


Were you rating the ad or the article about the ad?
Tyler Wills
 16 Apr 2012, 17:36 #147645 Reply To Post
I was rating your post - the link - without comments.

Thought that's what you wanted.

Have you considered Emma having an Ipad in the 12th? - to keep up with the fracking, recharging might be a problem though.
This post was last edited by Tyler Wills, 16 Apr 2012, 17:42
nhemyers
 04 May 2012, 05:30 #149062 Reply To Post
You think that's sick? Try this!

The Gang Rape of a Latina 6th Grader, and a Horrific Community Response

by Akiba SolomonShareThis | Print | Comment (76)

Monday, March 14 2011, 2:48 PM EST Tags: sexual violence, texas, Videos, youth

Until last week I had never heard of Cleveland, Texas, the small town where an 11-year-old Latina was gang raped, allegedly by 18 black males ages 14 to 27.

But since The Houston Chronicle told the victim’s story with compassion and a New York Times piece subtly blamed her; since various news outlets have essentially tried and convicted the suspects with a widely circulated mugshot collage; since Houston New Black Panther leader Quannell X sacrificed the victim in his zeal to raise questions about the police investigation; since Mujeres Unidas checked Quanell X; and since white supremacist Web sites are partying about this tragedy like it’s 1799, tiny Cleveland, has become a major example of how not to deal with rape in our communities.

A Thanksgiving Atrocity

For clarity’s sake, I’m recapping the basics of this monstrous, quickly changing case based on local news reports. The stories don’t identify the victim or suspects who are under 18 and rely heavily on police sources and documents. Prosecutors are under gag order; I have not seen the documents firsthand.

The assault took place last November, three days after Thanksgiving. According to a Houston Chronicle story, it allegedly began when a 19-year-old with prior drug convictions called the sixth grader and invited her to ‘ride around’ with him and two friends. The guys allegedly picked her up from her home on the outskirts of town and took her to a house in the Quarters, the economically depressed, predominantly black section of Cleveland.

At this house, the guys allegedly demanded the victim remove her clothes. She resisted at first but told police she relented when they threatened to get a crew of girls to beat her up and said they’d leave her in the Quarters without a ride home. After she disrobed, the males allegedly took turns raping her. At some point four more arrived. When a relative came home, the group—including the girl—snuck out of a back window. They decamped to a fetid, filthy abandoned trailer nearby and continued the assault. It’s unclear how many boys and men came to the trailer. What we do know: Some participants used their cell phones to videotape and photograph the rapes.

Over 50 percent of rape victims don’t report their attack; this child was no different. Her mother told the Chronicle that she’d suspected something was wrong when a picture of a man’s penis popped up on a cell phone the girl had borrowed from her father. Her assault came to light only after video snaked its way through the corridors of the girl’s middle school. A classmate told the principal. The principal called the police.

So far, 18 boys and men have been charged with the aggravated sexual assault of a child under 14. According to Texas law, any bastard who penetrated this girl—and any sorry-ass who stood around watching—is guilty of rape.

Seven of the suspects are in high school, including two basketball stars. One alleged assailant is the 21-year old son of a school board member. Then we have a 21-year-old who is already facing charges for another sexual assault and a 19-year-old with a pending manslaughter charge. The 27-year-old has already served time for selling cocaine and assaulting a family member.

The girl has reportedly switched schools and is in foster care after receiving threatening phone calls.

A Community Reacts—Poorly:


Cleveland has a population of 7,675 people. It’s 46 percent white, 28 percent Hispanic and 24 percent black. Now, if the media coverage truly reflects conventional wisdom among its 1,819 black folks, many in it don’t see what happened to this girl as an alleged gang rape but a case of consensual group sex gone wrong.

Relatives of the accused and a double agent ridiculously incompetent defense attorney James D. Evans III have focused on her ‘much older’ appearance, her ‘attention-seeking,’ rumors of a previous sexual history in the Quarters, her alleged aspirations of porn stardom, a Facebook page where the child reportedly bragged about sex, alcohol and drugs, and her mother’s neglect (not the father’s; never the father’s). In an interview on the local news, Anita Ellis Hancock, the mother of a 19-year-old suspect, exemplified this attitude. If you can’t watch the video, an alarming excerpt:




FOX 26: What did you do? Did you talk to your son?




Hancock: Yes I did. Yes I did. I said, ‘Baby, I’m your momma. You can talk to me.’ (The victim) said she was 17 years old and that’s what he told me.




FOX 26: But Anita, a lot of people would say, ‘This is an 11 year old child. Even if she lied, she’s eleven.’




Hancock: I understand that. I understand that. I’m not defending him. I’m not defending her. I’m not defending no child because if it were my child, I would feel the same way. My point is, where was her mother?




FOX 26: If this was reversed. If your son wasn’t your son, but you were the mother of this 11 year old, what would you do? What would you say? What is justice?




Hancock: First of all, I would know where she was. That’s the justice. Not knowing where your baby is is not justice. I feel like she should be accounted for not knowing where your baby at.




FOX 26: What lesson does you son need to learn?




Hancock: ID. Identification. This (holding up nametag and picture) is what you ask for baby.




FOX 26: So you’re going to tell your son, next time he meets a girl to ask for her ID?


Hancock: Identification.



Why This is Piss Poor:

Hancock’s words strike at the heart of a lethal double standard I’ve seen, hell, I’ve experienced too often in my community. I’m not picking on her; she’s trying to keep her son out of prison for 25 to life. But I believe she’s operating in a framework dangerous to her “baby.”

In this framework, girls of color are the predators, the fast-asses, the hot-asses, the hooker-hos, the groupie bitches, the trick-ass bitches, the bust-it-babies and the lil’ freaks who are willing to let dudes “run a train” on them. Too often let translates into, “she was rolling with a bunch of dudes” or “she showed poor judgement” or “she appropriated male-identified sexual bravado to fit in,” or “she’s a child who has been sexually exploited or abused.”

This double standard also renders black men and boys as victims of their own sexuality. They’re big-dick goon and goblin niggas just doing what niggas do when a smiling, or at least not-protesting young girl comes around. She’s 11? OK, but I didn’t know she was 11, so I didn’t do anything wrong, or violent, or exploitative or dangerous. My responsibility begins and ends with a request for ID.

My Takeaway, For What It’s Worth:

My next post will offer expert measured insights on how black men can help one another recognize and interrupt rape culture. For now, my suggested ground rules for people who believe they’re protecting black men and boys but actually enabling toxic sexual behavior:
•Adults should never participate in group sex with children. They shouldn’t be watching, taping or photographing it, either. Whether they’re arrested for it or not, they’ve committed sexual abuse.
•It should be inconceivable that a 14-year-old and a 27-year-old are sexually involved with the same girl. That is physically and emotionally dangerous for the girl; risky for the boy and criminal for the man.
•Men and boys should not have sex of any kind in a squalid, vermin-filled trailer abandoned since Hurricane Ike. If they do so, their families should be deeply concerned.
•Even if a girl says she’s 17—the legal age of consent in Texas—and seems sexually experienced; even if she seems open to making a video or down for a ‘train;’ even if her parents are oblivious and she seems vulnerable, raping her or watching it happen is a crime. No one deserves to be gang raped. No. One. Ever. If you find yourself trying to parse that one out, something is very wrong with you.
nhemyers
 04 May 2012, 05:36 #149063 Reply To Post
Came across the post and really thought I'd share and see what comments are ou there. God, these young ones need help. What's an 11 YO girl doing in riding around with an adult and going to his house?

Why do boys/men feel the need to gang rape? Individual rape is traumatic enough. Neither of them should ever happen. These guys need a long sentence in maximum - especially the adults.
This post was last edited by nhemyers, 04 May 2012, 05:37
PERRY
 04 May 2012, 08:08 #149065 Reply To Post
When I was a teenager, referencing sex-kittens (as one did as a hormonal pubescent) produced matinee idols (pass the Zimmerframe) such as Jane Fonda, Brigitte Bardot, Anne Margaret, and more locally Lulu. Deborah Harry was just sex personified.
I am alarmed at what my young cousins refer to as sex-kittens, and rather annoyed at whoever decided to refer spam to me such as the "college fuckbook" and "sexkittens". I watch too much Law and Order Special Victims to even respond and cancel. I just dump them. Responding to the site to cancel can be construed unfavourably.

Overhearing boasts of U-tubing adult sexual exploits - all the rage - is bad enough, but hearing of children going online u-tube in their bedroom is just frightening.

Sick? If this society had run the Grand National, it would be put down.

As to the difference between rape and gang rape? I don't think niceties of etiquette are considered by the scum who go down that road. Shoe-scrapings are shoe-scrapings and of little intelligence.

In a world where youngsters terrorise the vulnerable until they react and then film the reaction on their mobiles for lawsuit evidence - and where the law helplessly supports such activity, well ... need I say more?

This is the society we hold up as a paragon to the rest of the world, and try to impose on other cultures. Yeah, right!
This post was last edited by PERRY, 04 May 2012, 08:18
notleyab
 04 May 2012, 10:31 #149082 Reply To Post
Quote: nhemyers, Friday, 4 May 2012 05:30

.............. a Facebook page where the child reportedly bragged about sex, alcohol and drugs, and her mother’s neglect (not the father’s; never the father’s).


It wd be nice to think this wd have an adverse effect on Facebook's share float...
Huh...
One hopes there's somebody above all this in the town, but on a simple reading it sounds like the best thing to do wd be to let the USAF use it for an unannounced nuclear/napalm bomb test...
bigbadjoe
 04 May 2012, 10:59 #149084 Reply To Post
My tuppenceworth? Evil has no colour, height, age, nor gender. It is abominable to focus on any culture as beneath our own. Whta's wrong is wrong and we all know it, although someof us may try to offer some inane rationale.
Majordave
 04 May 2012, 11:10 #149087 Reply To Post
Quote: notleyab, Friday, 4 May 2012 10:31
Quote: nhemyers, Friday, 4 May 2012 05:30

.............. a Facebook page where the child reportedly bragged about sex, alcohol and drugs, and her mother’s neglect (not the father’s; never the father’s).


It wd be nice to think this wd have an adverse effect on Facebook's share float...
Huh...
One hopes there's somebody above all this in the town, but on a simple reading it sounds like the best thing to do wd be to let the USAF use it for an unannounced nuclear/napalm bomb test...

Roaches will always survive, unfortunately.


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