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LIZZIE'S MORNING SHIFT by Tania
Review By: mike46
This was original and amusing. As we already know the main character, she needed little introduction, so the reader is intrigued from the start. The idea could be deveoloped but is perfect, imo, as it stands.
I like the image of a pompous MP being brought down to earth by someone he "vaguely" recognises.
As I said before this is original, but the potential is there for developing this theme. In particular letting us see what the characters who she met think and what they tell the friends/family etc about this elderly, familiar person pounding the streets of London. Now the idea of her driving a bus...I would love to see that.
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