Thanks James. THE END seems a long way away somehow, even though I thought it was almost finished.
I've made some of the changes Michael suggested now, along with a few more from suggestions reviewers here had. I'm a bit worried about the whole re-write thing after Joanna's crit now (especially the beginning which both she and Michael commented on) in case I've managed to ruin it rather than improve it! But I'll stick it up at the weekend and see how it goes.
This post was last edited by Cathf, 31 Mar 2006, 11:37