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delfina
 16 Dec 2008, 18:30 #53234 Reply To Post
HOBGOBLET review by Donkey jacket

Whilst confessing that I don’t know my way around children’s stories, I thought that this deserved instant promotion from the 29th place that it appears to hold – and I will see what I can do about that!

I found the story delightful from beginning to end and in every aspect – in the characters, the imagery and in the dialogue. I should have been grateful for a short read – but, in this case, I would have happily read on. Actually, I have had to come back to this – having pasted all into Word, a wordsearch reveals neither a ‘Thor’ nor a number of other clues - I shall have to offer inspired answers to your questions.)

I particularly loved the “intro” and. the prologue – but the imagery captivated throughout. Difficult to find fault or offer constructive criticism. Well done AJK – keep writing!

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