Title : Charlie
Author : S O'Tierney
Genre : Literary Fiction
Review Extract from Review By: Fairy Queen
This is an excellent piece of poignant writing and I cannot criticize it. There are a few minor errors, which I'm certain you will pick up on a re-read. I wasn't sure what SEVOT stood for, and I think at the end, when Louie was talking, you should have used 'sure' instead of 'shur'. I'm postive you will be able to place this work. You thanked readers for persevering, but that was unnecessary,I couldn't have put your story down if I'd tried ... Well done and good luck"
A father muses on his son
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