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 27 Jul 2008, 15:08 #40236 Reply To Post

Title : Charlie

Author : S O'Tierney

Genre : Literary Fiction

Review Extract from Review By: Fairy Queen


This is an excellent piece of poignant writing and I cannot criticize it. There are a few minor errors, which I'm certain you will pick up on a re-read. I wasn't sure what SEVOT stood for, and I think at the end, when Louie was talking, you should have used 'sure' instead of 'shur'. I'm postive you will be able to place this work. You thanked readers for persevering, but that was unnecessary,I couldn't have put your story down if I'd tried ... Well done and good luck"

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