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Tyler Wills
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Thanks T. May have been a bit quicker and easier copying and pasting the synopsis then saying something like “Didn’t get it Cobber!” Ah there goes a possum, and another, and another… and here comes my hundred words, and a kangaroo, and here comes my credit point…
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NickPoole
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This story to me, except for beginning lines about a veru sick man and a Sister Teresa, wherever they were. AFter that it was rather confusing.I could not follow the story through all the chapters except to notice that there was a reference to some red covered volumns which were seeminglyat first unimportant, but after a while caught the writers attention. With all the many vague words and references to a lot of inscriptions and some type of code which he was unable to follow. His wife Annie who was alive then was so lovely and natural, always caring for him. The friend Jane tried to help with usuing the computer to deciper a script but was unsuccessful.There were words relating to Apes, monkeys,etc then many more which were way out of my understanding, but he began to realize they were important. A very intriguing, but hard to follow story.Goodo luck with it. There were words relating to Apes, monkeys etc then many more which were way out of my understanding. Goodo luck indeed.
STOP THE BILL
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PERRY
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Dear God, it's worse it's getting. Look, I think there's a big confusion out there between You Write On and the Write On project for adult literacy.
This post was last edited by PERRY, 13 Apr 2012, 10:58
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Majordave
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And they wonder why we wince every time we read: "You have received a review".
-------------------------------------------- Know not what you know and know nothing in return. (Confuseus)
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3752
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I had one like this, but it also criticised my grammar - I might not be perfect, but I taught English at university.
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Majordave
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That's a liberty criticising your grandma!
-------------------------------------------- Know not what you know and know nothing in return. (Confuseus)
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Andrew A
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I not see you problem man, do I say you write bad, not. Me likey good story, you take bat and ball home me play with self.
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rosefitzrobert
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I had a review from this same person on an earlier version of my story. Excoriated me for using four letter words, then "score-eee-ated-me" if you know what I mean. That is why I included this garlicky silver bullet in my synopsis,"If you object to swearing, please don't read this fucking story."
Henceforth, the angel of incoherence passed me by.
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gchallice
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I too have been tainted by The Bull - you have my sympathy.
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fxs60
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