User Id: sport68

Email Address: Private

Date Registered: 19 May 2010

Hello,

I prefer to hear what didn't work for you, where the punctuation was off, and/or where you got confused, so I can fix it. Praise is fine, but it doesn't help me make the story better — not that there's anything praiseworthy or that your tiny, cold, black heart is capable of such ;)

INCARNATE was my first novel (formerly Haktaw Heart). I pulled it off the shelf, cringed, then began reworking it. I beg your pardon if there are tense issues. It went from first person present to third person past. I'm still finding the occasional blunder.

Bill

http://dirtysmellyhippy.blogspot.co.uk/